Push, and clamp teeth
together; yearn to extend.
Feel and revel in hollow-eyed, back-arching vigour.
Stretch.
Capacity lengthens
and tightens,
loosens and flows;
with pain etched
of peppered beat,
and success
of whispered gasp.
Push, and clamp teeth together; yearn to extend. Feel and revel in hollow-eyed, back-arching vigour. Stretch. Capacity lengthens and tightens, loosens and flows; with pain etched of peppered beat, and success of whispered gasp. |
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A poem. De tu?
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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
[Don't want to.]
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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
Also, am amazed you put up a poem.
That's all.
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On both counts.
Thats all.
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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
I would give more thoughts on it than that, but I think nothing needs to be said.
Except maybe write more? Yes.
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*dALinkSystem | #Writers-Workshop | *project-improve | *LITplease | *Lit-Twitter | =DeviantArtSecret
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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
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*dALinkSystem | #Writers-Workshop | *project-improve | *LITplease | *Lit-Twitter | =DeviantArtSecret
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