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Slow by ~Syphon27:iconSyphon27:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Slow feelings reverberate, and gleam
like the sheen on a half-moon face.
Illiterate hand tucks beneath her chin,
and the softside thumb brushes tender curves
above slender jaw.

Five black eyes look up sadly, and
tilt to the left this time.

Breath upon breath,
hand crooked in hair.
Small, fragile, bittersweet.
She sighs, her chest swells,
and with strained neck,
tastes to tell you, that here,
beneath solemn branches,
she feels happiest.

But something that should
be slow, goes, and spins
ahead to reminiscent wake ups,
and teary day dreams.
©2009 ~Syphon27
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Author's Comments

Random.
Un-edited, but am too lazy.

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:icongwenavhyeuranastasia:
=GwenavhyeurAnastasia Feb 27, 2009, 6:04:51 PM
Mmm.
No comma before reverberate, maybe?
End is perfecion. :faint:
Much love.

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~Syphon27 Feb 27, 2009, 8:23:37 PM
You confuse me. But I agree.

:hug:

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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
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~Syphon27 Feb 27, 2009, 8:46:49 PM
"End is perfecion"?
Silly you.

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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
:icongwenavhyeuranastasia:
=GwenavhyeurAnastasia Feb 27, 2009, 8:49:25 PM
Perfecion = español, señor.
And hush. Tis true. Silly bello.

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~undauntedifly Feb 28, 2009, 11:53:46 AM
I really like this. I think it is the best that I've read so far!! :hug: I miss you and your poetry!!

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Hannah: *confused* But, Jesus doesn't have a penis!

Donnie: I would fight a rabid hyena for your vagina!

Sarai (me): There comes a moment when you know you are going to fall, but at the same moment you know you have to fall to survive it.
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~Syphon27 Feb 28, 2009, 5:16:52 PM
Thankyou :)
Why?
Miss you to though, so we're even.

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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
:iconsyphon27:
~Syphon27 Feb 28, 2009, 5:17:20 PM
Silly me :nod:

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Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti.
Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.
:iconundauntedifly:
~undauntedifly Mar 3, 2009, 3:29:42 PM
IDK. I just miss talking to you. You be fun to talk to :D I be using improper grammars (and pluralizations!)

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Hannah: *confused* But, Jesus doesn't have a penis!

Donnie: I would fight a rabid hyena for your vagina!

Sarai (me): There comes a moment when you know you are going to fall, but at the same moment you know you have to fall to survive it.
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